Thread:Dioga beta/@comment-28063203-20170419025430/@comment-28063203-20170731152142

It was good (I read it yesterday but couldn't comment since my mouse was missing...). I know you said it was a rough draft, so we might need a few parantheses in the dialogue to express the character's moods/actions. I'm also not sure if you've proofread it already, so I can help with that if you haven't.